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@@ -20,10 +20,13 @@ title: home
**[Install](download.html)**,
-read the **[tutorial](step-by-step.html)**
+read the
+**[release notes](release-notes.html)**,
+**[tutorial](step-by-step.html)**,
or **[manual](manual.html)**,
-join us on IRC/mail list.
+try the **[web UI](http://demo.hledger.org)**,
+introduce yourself and tell us what's good/bad..
hledger
-

+

-
Making accounting fun for techies.
-
-
-hledger is a computer program for easily tracking money, time, or
-other commodities, on unix, mac and windows. With simple yet powerful
-functionality accessed from command line, terminal or web browser, it is a
-reliable, lightweight, cross-platform alternative to Quicken or GnuCash.
-
+
+
+Simple, precise, future-proof accounting for techies.
+
+
+hledger is a lightweight accounting program for tracking money, time, or
+other commodities, on unix, mac and windows. With simple yet powerful
+functionality accessed from command line, terminal or web browser, it is a
+reliable, cross-platform alternative to Quicken, GnuCash, spreadsheets etc.
+
+**Step 1:** Record your transactions in a plain text file (using any text editor,
+hledger's add command, the web interface, CSV or OFX import, custom scripts..)
+
+**Step 2:** Run hledger to analyze and report your accounts, currencies,
+balances, monthly averages, market values and more.
+
+You can start out very simple, and get more sophisticated as you learn
+more about double-entry accounting. You'll feel closer to your
+finances, and accounting becomes fun. [Try it!](step-by-step.html)
+
@@ -95,26 +111,19 @@ reliable, lightweight, cross-platform alternative to Quicken or GnuCash.
### Free software
-hledger is available under the GNU GPLv3+, which helps ensure that it
-will remain free and available for as long as you need it. It has
-been developed as a community project by
-[Simon Michael](http://joyful.com) and
-[contributors](contributors.html) since 2007.
+hledger is Free software released under GNU GPLv3+, which helps ensure
+its longevity. It has been developed by
+[Simon Michael](http://joyful.com) and contributors since 2007.
[](http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html)
### inspired by Ledger
-hledger was inspired by and maintains substantial compatibility with [Ledger](faq.html#hledger-and-ledger),
-and is part of the enthusiastic and supportive "*ledger" community.
-
-
-
-### documented
-
-
-Complete, accurate documentation is a top priority.
+hledger is a Haskell reimplementation of the excellent [Ledger](faq.html#hledger-and-ledger).
+It remains substantially compatible with Ledger - if you wish you can keep your data compatible with both -
+and it is part of the enthusiastic and growing *ledger community.
+Read more about the differences in the [FAQ](faq.html#hledger-and-ledger).
@@ -123,18 +132,18 @@ Complete, accurate documentation is a top priority.

hledger is first a command-line tool.
-Your data lives in a simple, safe, plain text file which you can edit
+Your data lives in a plain text journal file which you can edit
any way you wish; hledger reads that file and produces reports of
various kinds, without changing your data. (It can help you add new
transactions, but does not change existing ones.)
-### and a curses UI
+### and a console UI

-hledger also provides a curses-style [console interface](manual#ui)
+hledger also provides a curses-style [console interface](manual#ui)
that lets you review account balances and transactions with fewer
keystrokes and less effort.
@@ -144,14 +153,14 @@ keystrokes and less effort.

-hledger comes with a built-in web server providing an alternate
-[browser-based interface](manual.html#web)
+hledger comes with a built-in web server providing a
+[web interface](manual.html#web)
([demo](http://demo.hledger.org)), for assisted data entry and point
and click reporting. The web and command-line/curses interfaces can be used
simultaneously.
-
+
### a Haskell application and library

@@ -178,15 +187,19 @@ applications.
-### focussed on serving the user
+### focussed on serving users
hledger strives to be usable, practical and to provide real-world value.
-Currently it is particularly suited to power users who appreciate the
+Intuitive features, bug-free operation and complete, accurate documentation are top goals.
+Currently it is particularly suited to techies, ie users who appreciate the
power of text files, revision control, scriptability and double entry
accounting.
-I've been using it daily and improving it since 2007.
-I needed a tool like this badly, and I want to keep it growing and helping others gain financial clarity and control.
+
+I've been using hledger daily and improving it since 2007.
+I needed a tool like this badly, and I want to keep it growing and
+helping others to transform their financial lives.
If you feel the same way, join us!
+