From 8f9326340a16f525ed1b1c9914c50dbe836b9955 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Simon Michael <simon@joyful.com>
Date: Tue, 2 Jun 2009 07:24:44 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] home page tweaks

---
 HOME | 18 ++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/HOME b/HOME
index d50a21f68..d45fb64dc 100644
--- a/HOME
+++ b/HOME
@@ -9,23 +9,21 @@ hledger
   `balance <http://hledger.org:5000/balance>`_ and 
   `register <http://hledger.org:5000/register?a=checking>`_ reports.
 - a remix, in `haskell <http://haskell.org>`_, of John Wiegley's excellent
-  c++ `ledger <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_ (because I
-  did not want to hack on c++ and because haskell seemed a good fit).
+  c++ `ledger <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_
 - a Free Software project developed since 2008 by
   `Simon Michael <http://joyful.com>`_ and contributors.
 
 **hledger aims to be...**
 
-- a practical, accessible tool for end users. I use it every day to track money and time, and as the basis for client invoices and tax returns.
+- a practical, accessible tool for end users. I use it every day to track money and time.
 - a useful library for finance-minded haskell programmers
 - a successful, time-and-money-solvent project within a thriving ecosystem of financial software projects.
 
 **To get help...** 
 
- chat me (sm) on the `#ledger irc channel
- <irc://irc.freenode.net/#ledger>`_ which we share with ledger, or join
- the `hledger google group <http://groups.google.com/group/hledger>`_.
- Or for something private, `email me <mailto:simon@joyful.com>`_.
+- chat me (sm) on the `#ledger irc channel <irc://irc.freenode.net/#ledger>`_ which we share with ledger
+- join the `hledger google group <http://groups.google.com/group/hledger>`_
+- for something private, `email me <mailto:simon@joyful.com>`_.
 
 Download
 --------
@@ -43,8 +41,8 @@ Documentation
 `Developer API docs <http://joyful.com/repos/hledger/api-doc>`_ |
 `Developer Notes <http://joyful.com/darcsweb/darcsweb.cgi?r=hledger;a=plainblob;f=/NOTES>`_ |
 `Contributor List <CONTRIBUTORS.html>`_ |
-See also ledger's `home page <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_
-and `manual <http://joyful.com/repos/ledger/doc/ledger.html>`_.
+c++ ledger's `home page <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_
+and `manual <http://joyful.com/repos/ledger/doc/ledger.html>`_
 
 Screenshots
 -----------
@@ -61,7 +59,7 @@ Code repository
 
 Related projects
 ----------------
-- `ledger <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_ inspired hledger, and the two projects are coevolving. If you liked hledger, try ledger too. It has more reporting options and is faster.
+- `ledger <http://wiki.github.com/jwiegley/ledger>`_ inspired hledger, and the two projects are coevolving. If you like hledger, try ledger too.
 - Tim Docker's `ledger-reports <http://dockerz.net/repos/ledger-reports>`_ uses hledger as a library to generate `html reports <http://dockerz.net/software/hledger_report_sample/report.html>`_. 
 - I have a few older bits and pieces at http://joyful.com/Ledger .