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@@ -68,9 +68,10 @@ clever tricks like the plague." --Edsger Dijkstra
      will still be out there. At best I'll live more easily and joyfully
      while serving the cause of Financial Solvency!
 
-     So I'm beginning by posting these notes and inviting feedback/ideas -
-     as much or as little as folks want to give.
-     
+     So I'm beginning by posting these notes and inviting your thoughts -
+     as much or as little as folks want to give. How could we do this so
+     that all benefit ?
+
 **** funding models
      Brainstorming some possible funding models & processes.